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The Goblin v6 Notes
I revised the RAIN spell and the Cave Spider.
The RAIN spell was way overpowered. Looking at the assorted spells in the Complete P&P, their range and magnitude are small. World changing magics, while they may exist, are not standard repertoire for spell casters spending one point per spell. Therefore, I changed it so the caster can summon a rain cloud that lasts one turn per level and follows the caster. I removed the text about intensifying the storm. It’s easy enough to make rulings on multiple overlapping rain clouds.
I imagine this might have various obvious uses such as blocking the sun, watering crops or suppressing fires. Being the only successful farmer in a drought-stricken land may well attract unwanted attention.
When creating spells for P&P, I suggest using the power of the spells in the original game as a guideline. This is not like D&D where a high level magician or cleric acquires terribly powerful spells that: create massive quantities of food or drink, raise and shape massive quantities of stone or steel, strike moderately powerful foes dead with one hit, and so on. Such magical effects might be possible if it suits the fiction, but I imagine it would require involved rituals with multiple participating magicians. Furthermore I think bending the rules of existence to that extent might attract supernatural attention with potentially serious consequences.
I revised the Cave Spider to statistically resemble the standard Giant Spider, but noting it was specially bred. It’s faster on flat ground than your typical giant spider, but do note that there is no penalty to saving against its poisonous bite. The selective breeding increased the speed and decreased the poison.
I’m coming to appreciate the importance of study, reflection and revision when creating game content. I’m grateful I have a quiet mindless job that lets me work these things out. I was halfway through my shift when the thought hit me “The rain spell sucks! And so does the cave spider. Fix them!”